[399] The Indian Serenade

And now for something completely different...

I arise from dreams of thee
In the first sweet sleep of night,
When the winds are breathing low,
And the stars are shining bright
I arise from dreams of thee,
And a spirit in my feet
Hath led me -- who knows how? --
To thy chamber window, Sweet!

The wandering airs they faint
On the dark, the silent stream --
The champak odors fail
Like sweet thoughts in a dream;
The nightingale's complaint,
It dies upon her heart;
As I must on thine,
Oh, beloved as thou art!

O lift me from the grass!
I die! I faint! I fail!
Let thy love in kisses rain
On my lips and eyelids pale.
My cheek is cold and white, alas!
My heart beats loud and fast;--
Oh! press it to thine own again,
Where it will break at last.

	-- Percy Bysshe Shelley

I really dislike this poem.

I don't care much for Percy Shelley at the best of times - I find his philosophy
irritatingly vague, his verse overly melodramatic, and his politics utterly
naive. The second complaint is the most telling - it's hard to take a poet
seriously if he tries to cultivate his image at the expense of his art. Of
course, Shelley has written some good poems ('Ozymandias' springs to mind), but
he's also written some shockers. In that respect he reminds of Belloc's Jemima:
'When she was good, she was very very good, but when she was bad she was
DREADFUL'. And today's poem is one of the dreadful ones.

Hmm, how do I loathe it? Let me count the ways:

The verse is trite. Technically sound, but utterly unmemorable - the last thing
I'd expect from a self-professed champion of individual expression and poetic
inspiration. The gratuitous insertion of 'local colour' in the form of the
champak and the nightingale makes me wince. As do the frequent apostrophes - "Oh
beloved as thou art!", "Oh lift me from the grass!", "Oh press it to thine own
again" - which sound like a bad actor hamming it up for the pits.

The sentiments are... well, sentimental. Verses like this one:
	"My cheek is cold and white, alas!
	 My heart beats loud and fast; --
	 Oh! press it to thine own again,
	 Where it will break at last. "
seem to embody the worst excesses of Romanticism - specifically, the
substitution of indiscriminate tearjerking for genuine emotion. And it's not as
if any of it were true, is it?

Most of all, though, I'm irritated by the sheer melodrama of the whole thing.
It's as if Shelley were consciously playing to the galleries of his reading
public (a reading public completely sold on the entire phenomenon of the
Romantic Image), shamelessly tugging at their heartstrings. This one line says
it all:
	"I die! I faint! I fail!"

Ugh.

thomas.

PS. To be taken with a pinch of salt <grin>. But boy, that was fun - maybe I
should run poems I dislike more often... what do you say?

From: rajeevc <rajeevc@>

ooh!! boar's tripe fried in auroch's dripping...

From: Suresh Ramasubramanian <suresh@>

On 14 Apr 2000, at 13:37, Abraham Thomas wrote:

> PS. To be taken with a pinch of salt <grin>. But boy, that was fun -
> maybe I should run poems I dislike more often... what do you say?

Do it - and start running crap like Toru Dutt and Sarojini Naidu 
churned out by the dozen.  That's the day I'll unsubscribe from 
minstrels ... there's enough sorrow in the world without having to 
read even a few lines of that dreck again.

[NOTE] The roasting they get at the end makes it almost worth 
wading through the trashy verse ;)

s


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From: Christina Godfrey <christinagodfrey@>

well, I find Indian Serenade quite beautiful. All the negative comments are
a bit depressing for me! For if we can't let go of ourselves a little, and
mingle with the myth of romance of one mans thoughts (truthful or false)
with out ripping it apart, Why read poetry in the first place? This poem
fills my heart with it's words and makes me want to believe in love. when
with today's harsh unforgivable world it is so hard to feel love truthfully.
Reality is a bit too much for me I guess. I love the sappy stuff!