'dear Captain Poetry' dear Captain Poetry, your poetry is trite. you cannot write a sonnet tho you've tried to every night since i've known you. we're thru!! Madame X dear Madame X Look how the sun leaps now upon our faces Stomps & boots our eyes into our skulls Drives all thot to weird & foreign places Till the world reels & the kicked mind dulls, Drags our hands up across our eyes Sends all white hurling into black Makes the inner cranium our skies And turns all looks sent forward burning back. And you, my lady, who should be gentler, kind, Have yet the fiery aspect of the sun Sending words to burn into my mind Destroying all my feelings one by one; You who should have tiptoed thru my halls Have slammed my doors & smashed me into walls. love Cap Poetry -- bpNichol